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    Kagura's Inspiration

    Kagura Ezume
    Kagura Ezume



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    Post by Kagura Ezume Mon Apr 27, 2020 7:18 pm

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    Name: Falling Star
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: Weapon’s reach
    Speed: Coordination
    Element: -
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Kenjutsu, a Sword
    Parent Technique: Chakra Channeling
    Hand Seals: -
    Description: Linear Strike consists of a single thrust straight forward by first holding the sword in front of the body and then putting in a twist from there.  The skill has a remarkably short post-motion delay after usage, allowing multiple Linear Strikes to be chained in together at a very short amount of time. +1 Tier Strength for the Strike and a clean hit can puncture armor of a lower Durability than the blades Durability and Quality.
    Weaknesses: Hitting a stronger durability armor will cause the user to bounce backwards and suffer -1 Tier Coordination for a single post.

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    Name: Comet’s Rush
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 50m
    Speed: +1 Tier
    Element: -
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: A Sword and C-Tier Speed Base
    Parent Technique: Linear Strike
    Hand Seals: -
    Description: To use Shooting Star, the user first needs to sprint create a bit of distance and sprint. Once enough speed is built up, the user assumes a forward bent posture and leaps forward, charging at their opponents at tremendous speed, while leaving a trail of light similar to that of a comet, and causing a sonic boom.  Although the skill only hits one target, it blows away anyone else caught in the way (No damage). Damage dealt on a hit is calculated using the user’s Speed, and this gains them +1 Tier Speed.
    Weaknesses: Requires a post to set up and prepare and a short distance to gain the speed needed, and then the launch.

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    Name: Star Splash
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: Sword’s Reach
    Speed: Coordination
    Element: -
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: A sword
    Parent Technique: Shooting Star
    Hand Seals: -
    Description:  Star Splash begins with three short thrusts at the target's chest, provoking the target to raise its guard up. Although the first three thrusts do not deal much damage (half), the number of hits and their speed is overwhelming. Afterwards, the three thrusts are followed by two slashes at the target's now undefended legs. The user then performs two strong jabs high and low, followed by a final strong stab at the target's chest.  +1 Tier to Coordination for the attack.
    Weaknesses: This combo can be interrupted by an overwhelmingly (+1 tier STR) powerful counter-attack.

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    Name: Dance of the Heavens
    Rank: C
    Power: -
    Activation Cost: -
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: Personal
    Speed: -
    Element: -
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Sword
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: -
    Description: This is simply Kagura’s preferred fighting style, Chakra enhanced, where speed is prioritized, particularly focused on quick stabbing thrusts and presenting a relentless assault of targeted strikes to overwhelm her foes.  +1 Tier Coordination
    Weaknesses: -
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    Post by Ryuko Mon Apr 27, 2020 11:09 pm

    Kagura Ezume wrote:
    Kagura's Inspiration TGmw6Wk
    Name: Falling Star
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: Weapon’s reach
    Speed: Coordination
    Element: -
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Kenjutsu, a Sword
    Parent Technique: Chakra Channeling
    Hand Seals: -
    Description: Linear Strike consists of a single thrust straight forward by first holding the sword in front of the body and then putting in a twist from there.  The skill has a remarkably short post-motion delay after usage, allowing multiple Linear Strikes to be chained in together at a very short amount of time. +1 Tier Strength for the Strike and a clean hit can puncture armor of a lower Durability than the blades Durability and Quality.
    Weaknesses: Hitting a stronger durability armor will cause the user to bounce backwards and suffer -1 Tier Coordination for a single post.

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    Name: Comet’s Rush
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 50m
    Speed: +1 Tier
    Element: -
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: A Sword and C-Tier Speed Base
    Parent Technique: Linear Strike
    Hand Seals: -
    Description: To use Shooting Star, the user first needs to sprint create a bit of distance and sprint. Once enough speed is built up, the user assumes a forward bent posture and leaps forward, charging at their opponents at tremendous speed, while leaving a trail of light similar to that of a comet, and causing a sonic boom.  Although the skill only hits one target, it blows away anyone else caught in the way (No damage). Damage dealt on a hit is calculated using the user’s Speed, and this gains them +1 Tier Speed.
    Weaknesses: Requires a post to set up and prepare and a short distance to gain the speed needed, and then the launch.

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    Name: Star Splash
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: Sword’s Reach
    Speed: Coordination
    Element: -
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: A sword
    Parent Technique: Shooting Star
    Hand Seals: -
    Description:  Star Splash begins with three short thrusts at the target's chest, provoking the target to raise its guard up. Although the first three thrusts do not deal much damage (half), the number of hits and their speed is overwhelming. Afterwards, the three thrusts are followed by two slashes at the target's now undefended legs. The user then performs two strong jabs high and low, followed by a final strong stab at the target's chest.  +1 Tier to Coordination for the attack.
    Weaknesses: This combo can be interrupted by an overwhelmingly (+1 tier STR) powerful counter-attack.

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    Name: Dance of the Heavens
    Rank: C
    Power: -
    Activation Cost: -
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: Personal
    Speed: -
    Element: -
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Sword
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: -
    Description: This is simply Kagura’s preferred fighting style, Chakra enhanced, where speed is prioritized, particularly focused on quick stabbing thrusts and presenting a relentless assault of targeted strikes to overwhelm her foes.  +1 Tier Coordination
    Weaknesses: -

    Approved! Nice job on these
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    Post by Kagura Ezume Sun May 24, 2020 3:05 am

    Name: Lightning Clone
    Rank: A
    Power: -
    Activation Cost: 20
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: -
    Speed: -
    Element: Lightning
    Skill: Ninjutsu + Lightning Release
    Classification: Naruto Canon
    Requirements: -
    Parent Technique: Shadow Clone
    Hand Seals: Dragon
    Description: This technique allows the user to make a shadow clone infused with lightning. Because it is a shadow clone, it is able to perform techniques and interact with the environment. If the clone is injured, it will revert to its natural lightning-state, at the same time electrocuting whatever makes contact with it for A-Rank Damage. Unlike a regular shadow clone, however, it does not send chakra back to the user upon reverting to lightning.
    Weaknesses: -

    Name: Howling Mine
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 50m/200m (See Description)
    Speed: S (Once Locked On)
    Element: Lightning
    Skill: Ninjutsu + Lightning Release
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: -
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: Snake
    Description: Kagura places a mine in melee range using the same hand that formed the seal, and it simply hovers in place for up to 5 post rounds. If the enemy moves within 50meters of the mine, it quickly is attracted towards them, and at this point, it cannot be deterred. It will explode in a large shockwave of electricity (10 meters).
    Weaknesses: The mine will track only for a total distance of 200 meters, at which point it will fizzle out.

    Name: Plasma Bolt
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 15
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 200m
    Speed: S
    Element: Lightning
    Skill: Ninjutsu + Lightning Release
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: -
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: Dragon + Snake + Horse
    Description: Fires a small bolt of insanely fast concentrated bolt of condensed lightning. May be fired more than once after the seals are performed, but the final seal Horse must be maintained.
    Weaknesses: While holding the seal to fire Plasma Bolts, no other seals can be made.

    Name: Plasma Blade
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: -
    Upkeep Cost: 15
    Range: Melee
    Speed: -
    Element: Lightning
    Skill: Ninjutsu + Lightning Release
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: -
    Parent Technique: Plasma Bolt
    Hand Seals: Tiger
    Description: Creates a four foot long blade of concentrated plasma, edged on both sides, focused on both sides of the user’s fist. This blade is capable of cutting through most materialistic things with ease and enables the user to utilize Kenjutsu techniques as well.
    Weaknesses: -

    Name: Plasma Shield
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: 15
    Range: Melee
    Speed: -
    Element: Lightning
    Skill: Ninjutsu + Lightning Release
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: -
    Parent Technique: Plasma Bolt
    Hand Seals: Dog
    Description: Creates a large shield of focused plasma that is six feet tall and three feet wide, capable of stopping most attacks once. Particularly useful for protecting herself and others from Area of Effect techniques.
    Weaknesses: Only projects directly from her extended hand, meaning you can get behind the user. Also, will break upon getting hit with any A-Rank Chakra Based Technique directly after (hopefully) preventing the damage.
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    Post by Luna Yamamoto Mon May 25, 2020 9:45 am

    Kagura Ezume wrote:Name: Lightning Clone
    Rank: A
    Power: -
    Activation Cost: 20
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: -
    Speed: -
    Element: Lightning
    Skill: Ninjutsu + Lightning Release
    Classification: Naruto Canon
    Requirements: -
    Parent Technique: Shadow Clone
    Hand Seals: Dragon
    Description: This technique allows the user to make a shadow clone infused with lightning. Because it is a shadow clone, it is able to perform techniques and interact with the environment. If the clone is injured, it will revert to its natural lightning-state, at the same time electrocuting whatever makes contact with it for A-Rank Damage. Unlike a regular shadow clone, however, it does not send chakra back to the user upon reverting to lightning.
    Weaknesses: -

    If I'm not mistaken, this sounds very much like Lightning Release: Shadow Clone. Which is an already registered canon technique under the Raiton Library.


    Name: Howling Mine
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 50m/200m (See Description)
    Speed: S (Once Locked On)
    Element: Lightning
    Skill: Ninjutsu + Lightning Release
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: -
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: Snake
    Description: Kagura places a mine in melee range using the same hand that formed the seal, and it simply hovers in place for up to 5 post rounds.  If the enemy moves within 50meters of the mine, it quickly is attracted towards them, and at this point, it cannot be deterred.  It will explode in a large shockwave of electricity (10 meters).
    Weaknesses: The mine will track only for a total distance of 200 meters, at which point it will fizzle out.

    Having a live technique be sustained would require an upkeep per post. In addition, this technique being sentient and homing in itself extends beyond the scope of what Ninjutsu is capable of.


    Name: Plasma Bolt
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 15
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 200m
    Speed: S
    Element: Lightning
    Skill: Ninjutsu + Lightning Release
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: -
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: Dragon + Snake + Horse
    Description: Fires a small bolt of insanely fast concentrated bolt of condensed lightning.  May be fired more than once after the seals are performed, but the final seal Horse must be maintained.
    Weaknesses: While holding the seal to fire Plasma Bolts, no other seals can be made.

    If you want a technique to achieve the speed and range you seek, this technique must be bumped up to S-rank and the cost to match it. In addition, you must pay per shot fired. Otherwise you could practically be your own minigun of S-rank projectiles


    Name: Plasma Blade
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: -
    Upkeep Cost: 15
    Range: Melee
    Speed: -
    Element: Lightning
    Skill: Ninjutsu + Lightning Release
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: -
    Parent Technique: Plasma Bolt
    Hand Seals: Tiger
    Description: Creates a four foot long blade of concentrated plasma, edged on both sides, focused on both sides of the user’s fist.  This blade is capable of cutting through most materialistic things with ease and enables the user to utilize Kenjutsu techniques as well.
    Weaknesses: -

    I feel this sorta intrudes on Hell Stab (LRA exclusive) or Chidori/Raikiri. A natural weakness with the Lightning element is the lack of control one has over the element due to its chaotic nature. That's why when Kakashi tried to implement his Lightning Element into Rasengan he got Chidori instead, which is basically a fist full of dense Lightning chakra. Creating a sculpted blade and maintaining it would be beyond what is normally capable of for Lightning Release without intruding on other existing exclusives.


    Name: Plasma Shield
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: 15
    Range: Melee
    Speed: -
    Element: Lightning
    Skill: Ninjutsu + Lightning Release
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: -
    Parent Technique: Plasma Bolt
    Hand Seals: Dog
    Description: Creates a large shield of focused plasma that is six feet tall and three feet wide, capable of stopping most attacks once.  Particularly useful for protecting herself and others from Area of Effect techniques.
    Weaknesses: Only projects directly from her extended hand, meaning you can get behind the user.  Also, will break upon getting hit with any A-Rank Chakra Based Technique directly after (hopefully) preventing the damage.

    For the same reasons above this technique is also denied. Lightning Release and Fire Release lack defensive options, and being able to perform something like this with Lightning Release alone would be outside the scope of the element.

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