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    Irui Mikiri's Showstopper's

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    Post by Icarus Fri Apr 03, 2020 2:17 pm

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    Post by Icarus Sat Apr 04, 2020 2:10 am

    Name: Lightning Style Genjutsu: Scorchlight
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: + 5 (Attach to Ninjutsu)
    Upkeep Cost: + 5 (Attach to Ninjutsu Upkeep if required)
    Range: Technique Dependent
    Speed: Technique Dependent
    Element: Lightning, Yin
    Skill: Genjutsu, Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplementary
    Requirements: Req. Lightning Ninjutsu
    Parent Technique: Flash of Lightning Pillar
    Hand Seals: Ninjutsu Handsigns + Rat, Ram, Snake
    Description: Irui, realizing that the human body responds strongly to light, developed this technique to hybridize his techniques. When using a Lightning Release Ninutsu, Irui can attach the Bird Seal, triggering "Scorchlight". When the opponent's eyes catch the light of Irui's Lightning Style they will experience an excruciating amplification of its brightness, as Irui attacks the retinae. The opponent's optical nerves will seemingly burn as if touched directly by heat, inflicting debilitating pain and blindness. Can be layered. Triggered by seeing light from Lightning Style.
    Weaknesses: Broken by Genjutsu-piercing Doujutsu. Can be detected by Sensors, and released through Genjutsu Kai, or chakra transfer. Can only work with Lightning Style Ninjutsu. If the Ninjutsu component clashes with Wind Style and it is negated, this technique cannot activate. Cannot trigger if opponent cannot see the lightning.



    Explanation: Irui weaves handseals, and infuses his Lightning Style with Yin Release. Similar to how Lightning Pillar produces a blinding flash that transmits illusions (note its hybrid classification), Irui applies the same effect to his Ninjutsu. When he adds the Bird Sign, he adds the cost of the Illusion to his Ninjutsu, and produces a blinding, searing flash of light accompanied by electricity. Much like how a bright flash IRL makes your eyes hurt, Irui just does this a thousandfold. Note that Irui already has an increased cost to Genjutsu in his UA's (+50%) making these techniques taxing on his Stamina.

    Name: Genjutsu Kai: Penance [WIP]
    Rank:
    Power:
    Activation Cost:
    Upkeep Cost:
    Range: 0-5m
    Speed:
    Element:
    Skill: Genjutsu
    Classification: Counter-defensive
    Requirements: Member of Orthodox Church of Jashin, Open to the Church
    Parent Technique: Genjutsu Kai
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: Activate when placed under a Genjutsu by the opponent. "Penance" allows followers of Jashin to break free from an opponent's illusion, often initiated with an overzealous prayer to the Dark Lord Jashin. The Orthodox Church of Jashin thrives as a death cult in the shadows, and any chance to partake or inflict suffering is said to please Jashin. The Cultist has two options: (1) If able, they may inflict injury to themselves, and consume their own blood while praying for release, and promise a violent sacrifice for Lord Jashin. The Cultist's conditioned brain, responding to the pain and taste (a sense the caster did not intend to target), releases the illusion. (2) The Cultist may also relish in the suffering produced by the illusion, essentially goading the opponent on. In this instance, the Cultist receives a +2 Tier Constitution Increase. If the opponent's Intelligence does not exceed this constitution stat, the illusion is broken.
    Weaknesses: Requires the Cultist to be under a genjutsu. Hypothetically, the Cultist can be tricked into injuring themselves if they believe they are caught in a genjutsu. Cannot work on Kekkei Genkai-produced illusions (e.g Sharingan genjutsu). Will not work on Easter.

    Name: Lightning Style: Demonic Illusion: White Elephant [WIP]
    Upkeep Cost:
    Range:
    Speed:
    Element: Lightning, Yin
    Skill: Genjutsu, Ninjutsu
    Classification:
    Requirements:
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals:
    Description: All lifeforms utilize electricity to some degree to function ("Bioelectricity"). Irui's signature "White Elephant" technique exploits this basic biological function by infecting the opposition with Yin-laced with Lightning Style
    Weaknesses:


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    Post by Luna Yamamoto Tue Apr 07, 2020 6:14 am

    Icarus wrote:
    Name: Lightning Style Genjutsu: Scorchlight
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: + 5 (Attach to Ninjutsu)
    Upkeep Cost: + 5 (Attach to Ninjutsu Upkeep if required)
    Range: Technique Dependent
    Speed: Technique Dependent
    Element: Lightning, Yin
    Skill: Genjutsu, Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplementary
    Requirements: Req. Lightning Ninjutsu
    Parent Technique: Flash of Lightning Pillar
    Hand Seals: Ninjutsu Handsigns + Rat, Ram, Snake
    Description: Irui, realizing that the human body responds strongly to light, developed this technique to hybridize his techniques. When using a Lightning Release Ninutsu, Irui can attach the Bird Seal, triggering "Scorchlight". When the opponent's eyes catch the light of Irui's Lightning Style they will experience an excruciating amplification of its brightness, as Irui attacks the retinae. The opponent's optical nerves will seemingly burn as if touched directly by heat, inflicting debilitating pain and blindness. Can be layered. Triggered by seeing light from Lightning Style.
    Weaknesses: Broken by Genjutsu-piercing Doujutsu. Can be detected by Sensors, and released through Genjutsu Kai, or chakra transfer. Can only work with Lightning Style Ninjutsu. If the Ninjutsu component clashes with Wind Style and it is negated, this technique cannot activate. Cannot trigger if opponent cannot see the lightning.



    Explanation: Irui weaves handseals, and infuses his Lightning Style with Yin Release. Similar to how Lightning Pillar produces a blinding flash that transmits illusions (note its hybrid classification), Irui applies the same effect to his Ninjutsu. When he adds the Bird Sign, he adds the cost of the Illusion to his Ninjutsu, and produces a blinding, searing flash of light accompanied by electricity. Much like how a bright flash IRL makes your eyes hurt, Irui just does this a thousandfold. Note that Irui already has an increased cost to Genjutsu in his UA's (+50%) making these techniques taxing on his Stamina.

    This needs to be a stand alone technique and not be added onto any Ninjutsu.

    With that in mind, the current layout of the technique needs to be edited to reflect this. Once this is done, we can consider working through it.
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    Post by Icarus Thu Apr 09, 2020 12:34 am

    Irui has recently forfeited his Genjutsu in an update, swapping it out for Fuinjutsu. As such he'd forfeiting all of his custom and canon genjutsu. I'll have to rework his UA's at a point too.



    Name: Raiton: Dātiraitoningu | Lightning Style: Dirty Lightning
    Rank: B
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 15
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 0-100m
    Speed: A
    Element: Lightning
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplementary
    Requirements: land
    Parent Technique: Lightning Style:
    Hand Seals: Bird, Ram, Hare, Ram, Bird, Snake
    Description: In the world of Shinobi, Lightning disintegrates Earth. Irui weaves the required handseal and stomps or strikes the ground, discharging a tremendous amount of electricity from his body. This outburst rapidly spiders and branches over the ground, electrocuting anything caught in its radius. As it moves, it chews through the ground, rapidly vibrating it, and breaking down the overlaying soil strata resulting in a thick cloud of smoke, ash and dust that Irui and his allies can use for cover. By filling the air with particulate matter, Irui can utilize the friction between it to fuel his Lightning Style, increasing the Power of Lightning Style by +1.
    Weaknesses: Irui is gambling with this technique. By generating Dirty Lightning he also creates ideal conditions for Magnet Style, and also fuels his opponent's Lightning Style techniques. Decrease visual Perception of all combatants, including its caster by -1. Lasts for 4 turns. Can be dispersed by appropriate Water Style.

    Open Technique for Kumo wrote:Name: Kekkai Ninjutsu: Kōdo yokuatsu no keisei | Barrier Ninjutsu: Altitude Oppressional Method [Critique, Feedback please]
    Rank: S
    Power: B-S
    Activation Cost:
    Upkeep Cost:
    Range: Hidden Cloud Village
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Barrier Ninjutsu
    Classification: Defensive, Supplementary
    Requirements: Kumogakure Exclusive
    Parent Technique: Sensing Barrier Technique, Five Seal Barrier Technique
    Hand Seals: Unknown (10)
    Description: Inspired by the vast sky the Hidden Cloud has continued to soar into, this Barrier Method brings the oppressive, indomitable nature of the mountains to bear. Layered horizontally, the Method incorporates the natural cloud cover, and is designed to exhaust invaders by sealing away the oxygen and heat of the immediate atmosphere, calibrated specifically to target Shinobi. As Shinobi climb higher up the mountains to the Hidden Cloud, zones become oppressively cold, the air thinner, lowering the Stamina and Constitution, wearing them down by the time they reach the village.

    Level 1:
    Level 2: 10,000 Ft.
    Level 3: 12,000 Ft.
    Level 4: 16,000 Ft.

    (A/N: It is highly recommended that you do not skip from Level 0 to Level 4, as the sudden shift in atmosphere and altitude can kill you outright.)

    Weaknesses: Village must have sufficient funds to install a village-wide barrier such as this. When produced, it is inherently maintained by an installation. It can be bypassed by Hidden Cloud shinobi, although the village can restrict access.
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    Post by Ryuko Thu Apr 09, 2020 5:10 am

    Icarus wrote:Irui has recently forfeited his Genjutsu in an update, swapping it out for Fuinjutsu. As such he'd forfeiting all of his custom and canon genjutsu. I'll have to rework his UA's at a point too.



    Name: Raiton: Dātiraitoningu | Lightning Style: Dirty Lightning
    Rank: B
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 15
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 0-100m
    Speed: A
    Element: Lightning
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplementary
    Requirements: land
    Parent Technique: Lightning Style:
    Hand Seals: Bird, Ram, Hare, Ram, Bird, Snake
    Description: In the world of Shinobi, Lightning disintegrates Earth. Irui weaves the required handseal and stomps or strikes the ground, discharging a tremendous amount of electricity from his body. This outburst rapidly spiders and branches over the ground, electrocuting anything caught in its radius. As it moves, it chews through the ground, rapidly vibrating it, and breaking down the overlaying soil strata resulting in a thick cloud of smoke, ash and dust that Irui and his allies can use for cover. By filling the air with particulate matter, Irui can utilize the friction between it to fuel his Lightning Style, increasing the Power of Lightning Style by +1.
    Weaknesses: Irui is gambling with this technique. By generating Dirty Lightning he also creates ideal conditions for Magnet Style, and also fuels his opponent's Lightning Style techniques. Decrease visual Perception of all combatants, including its caster by -1. Lasts for 4 turns. Can be dispersed by appropriate Water Style.

    Open Technique for Kumo wrote:Name: Kekkai Ninjutsu: Kōdo yokuatsu no keisei | Barrier Ninjutsu: Altitude Oppressional Method [Critique, Feedback please]
    Rank: S
    Power: B-S
    Activation Cost:
    Upkeep Cost:
    Range: Hidden Cloud Village
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Barrier Ninjutsu
    Classification: Defensive, Supplementary
    Requirements: Kumogakure Exclusive
    Parent Technique: Sensing Barrier Technique, Five Seal Barrier Technique
    Hand Seals: Unknown (10)
    Description: Inspired by the vast sky the Hidden Cloud has continued to soar into, this Barrier Method brings the oppressive, indomitable nature of the mountains to bear. Layered horizontally, the Method incorporates the natural cloud cover, and is designed to exhaust invaders by sealing away the oxygen and heat of the immediate atmosphere, calibrated specifically to target Shinobi. As Shinobi climb higher up the mountains to the Hidden Cloud, zones become oppressively cold, the air thinner, lowering the Stamina and Constitution, wearing them down by the time they reach the village.

    Level 1:
    Level 2: 10,000 Ft.
    Level 3: 12,000 Ft.
    Level 4: 16,000 Ft.

    (A/N: It is highly recommended that you do not skip from Level 0 to Level 4, as the sudden shift in atmosphere and altitude can kill you outright.)

    Weaknesses: Village must have sufficient funds to install a village-wide barrier such as this. When produced, it is inherently maintained by an installation. It can be bypassed by Hidden Cloud shinobi, although the village can restrict access.  

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    Post by Icarus Thu Apr 09, 2020 2:12 pm

    Couldn't locate the Unranked Jutsu thread, so I'll start here.

    Name: Lightning Release: Tiger Scissors
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: B
    Upkeep Cost:
    Range: 0-5m
    Speed: A
    Element: Lightning
    Skill: Fuinjutsu
    Classification: Defensive
    Requirements: Fuinjutsu + Ninjutsu
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: Tiger, Dragon, Tiger, Snake, Tiger (optional), or Pre-made Seals
    Description: A motion activated Barrier Ninjutsu incorporating Lightning Style into its formulae. Tiger Scissors can be placed in preparation as a trap, or used immediately to snare an opponent.  Brimming with lightning, a bear-trap like seal will burst from the ground when triggered, snapping shut on the opponent. The seal's blades lock down the opponent, and fully immobilize the enemy, severely wounding them in the process. Opponent's with Coordination lower than A-rank will be caught when crossing this barrier ninjutsu. Does not require  premade seals to utilize, however these can be incorporated for setting multiple traps.
    Weaknesses: Can be detected by Sensors. Dispelled by sufficient Wind Style. Requires a solid surface, cannot be used on water. Should a skilled Fuinjutsu user encounter this, they can crack the seal if they are caught. Opponent's with A-rank strength or higher can free themselves, but the results will be nothing less than gruesome.

    Set the upkeep cost low so it can be maintained over several turns if needed (think about how long bear-traps remain loaded without maintenance). When its triggered within 5m of the opponent or the sealing tag, it springs shut, snaring their legs, and only the most nimble can avoid it. Like an actual trap it hits hard with lethal force.

    Edits: Changed the Power of the technique and made the cost match the power.


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    Post by Kensai Thu Apr 09, 2020 3:23 pm

    Icarus wrote: Couldn't locate the Unranked Jutsu thread, so I'll start here.

    Name: Lightning Release: Tiger Scissors
    Rank: B
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: - (Motion/contact triggered)
    Upkeep Cost: 5
    Range: 0-5m
    Speed: A
    Element: Lightning
    Skill: Fuinjutsu
    Classification: Defensive
    Requirements: Fuinjutsu + Ninjutsu
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: Tiger, Dragon, Tiger, Snake, Tiger (optional), or Pre-made Seals
    Description: A motion activated Barrier Ninjutsu incorporating Lightning Style into its formulae. Tiger Scissors can be placed in preparation as a trap, or used immediately to snare an opponent.  Brimming with lightning, a bear-trap like seal will burst from the ground when triggered, snapping shut on the opponent. The seal's blades lock down the opponent, and fully immobilize the enemy, severely wounding them in the process. Opponent's with Coordination lower than A-rank will be caught when crossing this barrier ninjutsu. Does not require  premade seals to utilize, however these can be incorporated for setting multiple traps.
    Weaknesses: Can be detected by Sensors. Dispelled by sufficient Wind Style. Requires a solid surface, cannot be used on water. Should a skilled Fuinjutsu user encounter this, they can crack the seal if they are caught. Opponent's with A-rank strength or higher can free themselves, but the results will be nothing less than gruesome.

    Set the upkeep cost low so it can be maintained over several turns if needed (think about how long bear-traps remain loaded without maintenance). When its triggered within 5m of the opponent or the sealing tag, it springs shut, snaring their legs, and only the most nimble can avoid it. Like an actual trap it hits hard with lethal force.

    So my recommendation instead is write this to have a one time power appropriate cost, as it's a fuuinjutsu and you can set a seal and leave it. It'll work the same way, except you're paying the proper amount of chakra for it. As it stands the cost is too low.
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    Post by Icarus Thu Apr 09, 2020 4:11 pm

    Couldn't locate the Unranked Jutsu thread, so I'll start here.

    Name: Lightning Release: Tiger Scissors
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: B
    Upkeep Cost:
    Range: 0-5m
    Speed: A
    Element: Lightning
    Skill: Fuinjutsu
    Classification: Defensive
    Requirements: Fuinjutsu + Ninjutsu
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: Tiger, Dragon, Tiger, Snake, Tiger (optional), or Pre-made Seals
    Description: A motion activated Barrier Ninjutsu incorporating Lightning Style into its formulae. Tiger Scissors can be placed in preparation as a trap, or used immediately to snare an opponent.  Brimming with lightning, a bear-trap like seal will burst from the ground when triggered, snapping shut on the opponent. The seal's blades lock down the opponent, and fully immobilize the enemy, severely wounding them in the process. Opponent's with Coordination lower than A-rank will be caught when crossing this barrier ninjutsu. Does not require  premade seals to utilize, however these can be incorporated for setting multiple traps.
    Weaknesses: Can be detected by Sensors. Dispelled by sufficient Wind Style. Requires a solid surface, cannot be used on water. Should a skilled Fuinjutsu user encounter this, they can crack the seal if they are caught. Opponent's with A-rank strength or higher can free themselves, but the results will be nothing less than gruesome.


    Edits: Changed the Power of the technique and made the cost match the power.
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    Post by Kensai Thu Apr 09, 2020 4:14 pm

    Icarus wrote:Couldn't locate the Unranked Jutsu thread, so I'll start here.

    Name: Lightning Release: Tiger Scissors
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: B
    Upkeep Cost:
    Range: 0-5m
    Speed: A
    Element: Lightning
    Skill: Fuinjutsu
    Classification: Defensive
    Requirements: Fuinjutsu + Ninjutsu
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: Tiger, Dragon, Tiger, Snake, Tiger (optional), or Pre-made Seals
    Description: A motion activated Barrier Ninjutsu incorporating Lightning Style into its formulae. Tiger Scissors can be placed in preparation as a trap, or used immediately to snare an opponent.  Brimming with lightning, a bear-trap like seal will burst from the ground when triggered, snapping shut on the opponent. The seal's blades lock down the opponent, and fully immobilize the enemy, severely wounding them in the process. Opponent's with Coordination lower than A-rank will be caught when crossing this barrier ninjutsu. Does not require  premade seals to utilize, however these can be incorporated for setting multiple traps.
    Weaknesses: Can be detected by Sensors. Dispelled by sufficient Wind Style. Requires a solid surface, cannot be used on water. Should a skilled Fuinjutsu user encounter this, they can crack the seal if they are caught. Opponent's with A-rank strength or higher can free themselves, but the results will be nothing less than gruesome.


    Edits: Changed the Power of the technique and made the cost match the power.

    Approved!~
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    Post by Icarus Sat Apr 11, 2020 1:11 am

    Name: Shogeki Kyushu || Shock Absorption
    Rank: B
    Power: -
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 5
    Range: 0-5m
    Speed: Instant
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Ninjutsu, Fuinjutsu, Barrier Ninjutsu
    Classification: Defensive, Supplementary
    Requirements:
    Parent Technique: Generic Sealing Technique, Chakra Absorption Seal
    Hand Seals: -
    Description: Using a Sealing Tag, or Chakra Ink, the caster will deploy a short-range barrier ninjutsu around themselves. This translucent barrier, aptly called "Shock Absorption", will absorb the impact of the opponent's attack(s), blocking it for the caster. The barrier is only as strong as the seal, thus the caster's Intelligence must equal or be greater, than the opponent's Strength or the Power of their technique (Brains over Brawn). "Shock Absorption" stores the Power of the technique/impact, which can be stored for later, and used as recoil, returning the force of the attack directly proportional to the damage received.
    Weaknesses: Obviously has no effective on "support" techniques (e.x Genjutsu). The opponent must strike the barrier with their technique, be it Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Bukijutsu, etc, and produce some form of kinetic energy. This kinetic energy is then stored, thus techniques involving Lightning or Wind which are purely energy-based, unless they produce an explosive/concussive force, will simply be blocked.

    Edited.


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    Post by Kensai Sun Apr 12, 2020 12:35 am

    Icarus wrote:
    Name: Shogeki Kyushu || Shock Absorption
    Rank: B
    Power: -
    Activation Cost: 20
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 0-5m
    Speed: Instant
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Ninjutsu, Fuinjutsu, Barrier Ninjutsu
    Classification: Defensive, Supplementary
    Requirements:
    Parent Technique: Generic Sealing Technique, Chakra Absorption Seal
    Hand Seals: -
    Description: Using a Sealing Tag, or Chakra Ink, the caster will deploy a short-range barrier ninjutsu around themselves. This translucent barrier, aptly called "Shock Absorption", will absorb the impact of the opponent's attack, blocking it for the caster. The barrier is only as strong as the seal, thus the caster's Intelligence must equal or be greater, than the opponent's Strength or the Power of their technique (Brains over Brawn). "Shock Absorption" stores the Power of the technique/impact, which can be stored for later, and used as recoil, returning the force of the attack directly proportional to the damage received.
    Weaknesses: Obviously has no effective on "support" techniques (e.x Genjutsu). The opponent must strike the barrier with their technique, be it Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Bukijutsu, etc, and produce some form of kinetic energy. This kinetic energy is then stored, thus techniques involving Lightning or Wind which are purely energy-based, unless they produce an explosive/concussive force, will simply be blocked.

    Barrier jutsus need to have an upkeep cost.
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    Post by Icarus Tue Apr 14, 2020 1:14 am

    Name: Shogeki Kyushu || Shock Absorption
    Rank: B
    Power: -
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 5
    Range: 0-5m
    Speed: Instant
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Ninjutsu, Fuinjutsu, Barrier Ninjutsu
    Classification: Defensive, Supplementary
    Requirements:
    Parent Technique: Generic Sealing Technique, Chakra Absorption Seal
    Hand Seals: -
    Description: Using a Sealing Tag, or Chakra Ink, the caster will deploy a short-range barrier ninjutsu around themselves. This translucent barrier, aptly called "Shock Absorption", will absorb the impact of the opponent's attack(s), blocking it for the caster. The barrier is only as strong as the seal, thus the caster's Intelligence must equal or be greater, than the opponent's Strength or the Power of their technique (Brains over Brawn). "Shock Absorption" stores the Power of the technique/impact, which can be stored for later, and used as recoil, returning the force of the attack directly proportional to the damage received.
    Weaknesses: Obviously has no effective on "support" techniques (e.x Genjutsu). The opponent must strike the barrier with their technique, be it Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Bukijutsu, etc, and produce some form of kinetic energy. This kinetic energy is then stored, thus techniques involving Lightning or Wind which are purely energy-based, unless they produce an explosive/concussive force, will simply be blocked.

    Edited.
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    Post by Luna Yamamoto Tue Apr 14, 2020 5:25 am


    Name: Raiton: Dātiraitoningu | Lightning Style: Dirty Lightning
    Rank: B
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 15
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 0-100m
    Speed: A
    Element: Lightning
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplementary
    Requirements: land
    Parent Technique: Lightning Style:
    Hand Seals: Bird, Ram, Hare, Ram, Bird, Snake
    Description: In the world of Shinobi, Lightning disintegrates Earth. Irui weaves the required handseal and stomps or strikes the ground, discharging a tremendous amount of electricity from his body. This outburst rapidly spiders and branches over the ground, electrocuting anything caught in its radius. As it moves, it chews through the ground, rapidly vibrating it, and breaking down the overlaying soil strata resulting in a thick cloud of smoke, ash and dust that Irui and his allies can use for cover. By filling the air with particulate matter, Irui can utilize the friction between it to fuel his Lightning Style, increasing the Power of Lightning Style by +1.
    Weaknesses: Irui is gambling with this technique. By generating Dirty Lightning he also creates ideal conditions for Magnet Style, and also fuels his opponent's Lightning Style techniques. Decrease visual Perception of all combatants, including its caster by -1. Lasts for 4 turns. Can be dispersed by appropriate Water Style.

    Unapproved.

    This technique has quite a bit of speed and a substantial range for its rank. Since it's an AoE I would suggest lowering the range down to 40 m. and having a Speed of B-tier.

    Additionally, this technique increase the power of Lightning Style on top of the proposed damage. I would like to see a Lightning Style buffing technique be registered completely separate.

    Finally, this technique is unable to give debuffs under the premise of a smokescreen. Smokescreens inhibit vision in general, so a Perception debuff would be wrong to tack onto this. But in general, this drawback is more of a strength disguised as a drawback in general since it also effects the target.

    With these changes in mind, feel free to decrease the Activation cost to 10 CP instead of 15 CP.

    Open Technique for Kumo wrote:
    Name: Kekkai Ninjutsu: Kōdo yokuatsu no keisei | Barrier Ninjutsu: Altitude Oppressional Method [Critique, Feedback please]
    Rank: S
    Power: B-S
    Activation Cost:
    Upkeep Cost:
    Range: Hidden Cloud Village
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Barrier Ninjutsu
    Classification: Defensive, Supplementary
    Requirements: Kumogakure Exclusive
    Parent Technique: Sensing Barrier Technique, Five Seal Barrier Technique
    Hand Seals: Unknown (10)
    Description: Inspired by the vast sky the Hidden Cloud has continued to soar into, this Barrier Method brings the oppressive, indomitable nature of the mountains to bear. Layered horizontally, the Method incorporates the natural cloud cover, and is designed to exhaust invaders by sealing away the oxygen and heat of the immediate atmosphere, calibrated specifically to target Shinobi. As Shinobi climb higher up the mountains to the Hidden Cloud, zones become oppressively cold, the air thinner, lowering the Stamina and Constitution, wearing them down by the time they reach the village.

    Level 1:
    Level 2: 10,000 Ft.
    Level 3: 12,000 Ft.
    Level 4: 16,000 Ft.

    (A/N: It is highly recommended that you do not skip from Level 0 to Level 4, as the sudden shift in atmosphere and altitude can kill you outright.)

    Weaknesses: Village must have sufficient funds to install a village-wide barrier such as this. When produced, it is inherently maintained by an installation. It can be bypassed by Hidden Cloud shinobi, although the village can restrict access.  

    Unapproved.

    This is conceptually denied. This sounds too powerful to fit under any restricted category. Village-wide (though this currently sounds nation-wide) damaging/debuff effects are generally not allowed. This is not to mention a lot of elements of this are incomplete (Level 1 has no defined value, hand seals are unspecified, Kumogakure Exclusive requirement is not defined, Sta/Con debuff values not mentioned) or share aspects of Engineering such as requiring funding to install some sort of barrier. But these are all irrelevant due to the nature of this technique.
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    Post by Luna Yamamoto Tue Apr 14, 2020 6:05 am

    Name: Shogeki Kyushu || Shock Absorption
    Rank: B
    Power: -
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 5
    Range: 0-5m
    Speed: Instant
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Ninjutsu, Fuinjutsu, Barrier Ninjutsu
    Classification: Defensive, Supplementary
    Requirements:
    Parent Technique: Generic Sealing Technique, Chakra Absorption Seal
    Hand Seals: -
    Description: Using a Sealing Tag, or Chakra Ink, the caster will deploy a short-range barrier ninjutsu around themselves. This translucent barrier, aptly called "Shock Absorption", will absorb the impact of the opponent's attack(s), blocking it for the caster. The barrier is only as strong as the seal, thus the caster's Intelligence must equal or be greater, than the opponent's Strength or the Power of their technique (Brains over Brawn). "Shock Absorption" stores the Power of the technique/impact, which can be stored for later, and used as recoil, returning the force of the attack directly proportional to the damage received.
    Weaknesses: Obviously has no effective on "support" techniques (e.x Genjutsu). The opponent must strike the barrier with their technique, be it Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Bukijutsu, etc, and produce some form of kinetic energy. This kinetic energy is then stored, thus techniques involving Lightning or Wind which are purely energy-based, unless they produce an explosive/concussive force, will simply be blocked.

    "The barrier is only as strong as the seal, thus the caster's Intelligence must equal or be greater, than the opponent's Strength or the Power of their technique (Brains over Brawn)."

    The power of this barrier cannot be determined by the user's Intelligence stat. The barrier is only as strong as the technique's rank/power. So an attack that is higher than B-rank will destroy this barrier.

    If you want to seal damage types, you would need to register a technique entirely separate as Fuuinjutsu, such as the Fire Sealing Method. Barrier Ninjutsu generally function as, well, barriers. They're primarily used as area denial or obstacles to overcome. This is different from Fuuinjutsu, which involves sealing damage types.

    The only reason I see these two incompatible is because:

    A.) You need a medium to seal live technique, so scrolls primarily. Barriers only require the activation of a seal, so functionally they're too different.
    B.) Sealing live technique currently have a five round cool down. By combining this concept with the barrier it practically overcomes this restriction.
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    Post by Icarus Wed Apr 15, 2020 3:09 pm

    Shock Absorption:

    Fair enough. I'll come back to this later.
    Dirty Lightning:

    Removed the Lightning boosting property. Turned it into a basic smoke-screen and AOE.



    Regarding the Altitude Oppression Barrier, that was a WIP, not sure why that was accidentally approved. I marked it for feedback originally.
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    Post by Luna Yamamoto Sat Apr 18, 2020 7:32 am

    Name: Raiton: Dātiraitoningu | Lightning Style: Dirty Lightning
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 15
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 0-50m
    Speed: B
    Element: Lightning
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplementary
    Requirements: Land
    Parent Technique: Lightning Style:
    Hand Seals: Bird, Ram, Hare, Ram, Bird, Snake
    Description: In the world of Shinobi, Lightning disintegrates Earth. Irui weaves the required handseal and stomps or strikes the ground, discharging a tremendous amount of electricity from his body. This outburst rapidly spiders and branches over the ground. As it moves, it chews through the ground, rapidly vibrating it, and breaking down the overlaying soil strata resulting in a thick cloud of choking smoke, ash and dust that Irui and his allies can use for cover.

    Weaknesses: Decreases visibility for all combatants by thickly covering the field in particulates. Creates excellent conditions for Magnet Style. Lasts for 4 turns. Can be dispersed by appropriate Wind Style.

    Feel free to edit this to 10CP. It is Approved.
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    Post by Icarus Fri Apr 24, 2020 1:41 am

    WIP technique wrote:Name: Irui's Unnamed Lightning Ninjutsu [WIP]
    Rank: A
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: B
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 0-100m
    Speed: A
    Element: Lightning
    Skill: Ninjutsu, Sensory
    Classification: Offensive
    Requirements:
    Parent Technique: False Darkness, Lightning Ball
    Hand Seals:
    Quote: "Whether its the Mikiri or the Church, this village is rotten to its core. It must be cauterized."[/i]
    Description: After enduring intense training with Niko Kenochi, Irui's Lightning affinity has been honed to a profound degree. Using Lightning Style to ionize the air, Irui will produce 10 spears of concentrated lightning (Per tier of Coordination past C-rank). Using his Sensory ability, Irui will fire these lightning spears into his targets 100m away, with each spear delivering a powerful, blinding electrical explosion (5m radius)
    Weaknesses:
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    Post by Icarus Sat May 09, 2020 5:36 pm


    Name: Fuinjutsu: Connected Swapping Method
    Rank: C
    Power: D
    Activation Cost:C (0-50m), B (0-100m)
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 0-50m, 0-100m
    Speed: Instant
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Fuinjutsu
    Classification: Supplementary
    Requirements: Requires two seals (Seal A and Seal B)
    Parent Technique: Generic Sealing Technique
    Hand Seals: Bird, Dog, Bird, Rat, Hare, Bird
    Description: Developed by Irui after studying under Niko Kanuchi. Applicable with chakra ink or sealing tags, the user will place a seal on an item, armor, weapon or surface. Next they will place a second seal onto a surface, be it a weapon, clothing, armor, item, etc. Using the Generic Sealing technique, the item will be sealed into Seal 1, and be automatically unsealed from Seal 2, allowing it to travel via fuinjutsu. Using this technique, the caster can swap items with a target (ex. sending them kunai knives, for example) to aid them in combat, or complete a one-way transfer to send them items.

    Weaknesses: Cannot bypass Barrier Ninjutsu, or circumvent space-time techniques. Seals placed at different points can be cracked with sufficient Fuinjutsu skill and intelligence. If using this technique to send items to the target, they must be visible. User is restricted to inanimate objects, like weapons or armor.
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    Post by Ryuko Mon May 11, 2020 2:44 am

    Icarus wrote:

    Name: Fuinjutsu: Connected Swapping Method
    Rank: C
    Power: D
    Activation Cost:C (0-50m), B (0-100m)
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 0-50m, 0-100m
    Speed: Instant
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Fuinjutsu
    Classification: Supplementary
    Requirements: Requires two seals (Seal A and Seal B)
    Parent Technique: Generic Sealing Technique
    Hand Seals: Bird, Dog, Bird, Rat, Hare, Bird
    Description: Developed by Irui after studying under Niko Kanuchi. Applicable with chakra ink or sealing tags, the user will place a seal on an item, armor, weapon or surface. Next they will place a second seal onto a surface, be it a weapon, clothing, armor, item, etc. Using the Generic Sealing technique, the item will be sealed into Seal 1, and be automatically unsealed from Seal 2, allowing it to travel via fuinjutsu. Using this technique, the caster can swap items with a target (ex. sending them kunai knives, for example) to aid them in combat, or complete a one-way transfer to send them items.

    Weaknesses: Cannot bypass Barrier Ninjutsu, or circumvent space-time techniques. Seals placed at different points can be cracked with sufficient Fuinjutsu skill and intelligence. If using this technique to send items to the target, they must be visible. User is restricted to inanimate objects, like weapons or armor.

    Approved with the understanding that the items have to be within range to put something into seal 1 and then take it out from seal 2.
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    Post by Icarus Wed May 20, 2020 12:11 am

    Name: Sensory Technique:
    Rank: B
    Power: D
    Activation Cost: D
    Upkeep Cost: D
    Range: 0-125m, 0-250m (contact)
    Speed: Instant
    Element: Lightning
    Skill: Sensory, Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplementary
    Requirements: N/A, Signature Technique
    Parent Technique: Sensory Technique
    Hand Seals: None, Bird, or Bird + Contact (200m)
    Description: Irui trained intensively with Niko Kanuchi to improve his accuracy with Lightning Style and enable him to strike targets at 100m with surgical precision. From it, Irui developed this Sensory Technique, that allowed him to detect the "Flow" of charged particles and ions in the air. When lightning strikes, the "return pathway" is what is observed, when the charge completes its circuit and connects from cloud-to-ground. By using as inspiration for this technique, Irui can essentially map the path of his Lightning Style and use it to strike his opponents at considerable range.

    [I feel like there needs to be a stat thing here concerning tracking. Halp?]

    Weaknesses: Irui cannot be moving across the terrain, he must stop, chart the Flow, and fire his chosen technique. The greater Irui's range from the target, the greater its accuracy, as there is less variation. While Irui can sense the target and the flow, this does not guarantee an automatic success


    Name: Niko-Style Lightning Release: Polarity Spear
    Rank: A
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: A
    Upkeep Cost:  -
    Range: 0-100m
    Speed: A
    Element: Lightning
    Skill: Ninjutsu, Sensory
    Classification: Offensive
    Requirements: Signature technique
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals:
    Description: Irui, through intensive training with Niko Kanuchi the famed blacksmith of the Hidden Cloud, crafted this technique to complete it. Named after Keranos, the God of Storms in Niko's religion, Irui charges Lightning Release into a tightly compressed ball in his hand-- a focal point. The ball lightning is then released as a linear bolt of energy towards its target, striking at tremendous speed with equally deadly force; capable of piercing through solid defenses and at the very least dismembering its victims. [WIP]
    Weaknesses:


    Posted in the Jutsu help desk.
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    Post by Akihiro Wed May 20, 2020 11:36 pm

    Irui wrote:Name: Sensory Technique:
    Rank: B
    Power: D
    Activation Cost: D
    Upkeep Cost: D
    Range: 0-125m, 0-250m (contact)
    Speed: Instant
    Element: Lightning
    Skill: Sensory, Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplementary
    Requirements: N/A, Signature Technique
    Parent Technique: Sensory Technique
    Hand Seals: None, Bird, or Bird + Contact (200m)
    Description: Irui trained intensively with Niko Kanuchi to improve his accuracy with Lightning Style and enable him to strike targets at 100m with surgical precision. From it, Irui developed this Sensory Technique, that allowed him to detect the "Flow" of charged particles and ions in the air. When lightning strikes, the "return pathway" is what is observed, when the charge completes its circuit and connects from cloud-to-ground. By using as inspiration for this technique, Irui can essentially map the path of his Lightning Style and use it to strike his opponents at considerable range.

    [I feel like there needs to be a stat thing here concerning tracking. Halp?]

    Weaknesses: Irui cannot be moving across the terrain, he must stop, chart the Flow, and fire his chosen technique. The greater Irui's range from the target, the greater its accuracy, as there is less variation. While Irui can sense the target and the flow, this does not guarantee an automatic success


    I like the concept of this jutsu but I feel this isn't approvable because it can be a work around to another technique's weakness.
    I'm not comfortable approving an "auto-pilot for all Raiton" jutsu.
    My suggestion is for you to create a specific technique or set of techniques to work with this.
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    Post by Icarus Thu May 28, 2020 7:30 pm

    Irui recently purchased a pair of Resonating Echo Speakers (RES) a ninjutsu support item, to give himself a little more oomph. They don't appear to be regularly used by Kumo, and we don't have the derived jutsu for them in the Library. However I have seen people register techniques without learning "Resonating Echo Drill", Dosu's signature move with these weapons.

    Without further ado:

    "Equilibrium" has a fixed Coordination loss (2 tiers), with power derived from the number of handseals completed. Requires higher intelligence, and can only affect non-elemental ninjutsu.

    Equilibrium:

    Mods, I feel like this could be a solid technique or the beginning's of a fighting-style.  I think this could be accomplished with a regular Echo Drill-- basically just attaching the costs of Echo Drill to the following technique. The idea is: The more handsigns you can complete for a technique, the more sound-waves generated.


    Thunderclap is derived from Jacobi's own sound technique, with his permission.

    Thunderclap:


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    Post by Icarus Thu Jun 04, 2020 2:32 pm

    Bumping post, and adding the first section to a post for the Jutsu Request thread.
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    Post by Chigetsu Fri Jun 05, 2020 3:56 pm

    Icarus wrote:Irui recently purchased a pair of Resonating Echo Speakers (RES) a ninjutsu support item, to give himself a little more oomph. They don't appear to be regularly used by Kumo, and we don't have the derived jutsu for them in the Library. However I have seen people register techniques without learning "Resonating Echo Drill", Dosu's signature move with these weapons.

    Without further ado:

    "Equilibrium" has a fixed Coordination loss (2 tiers), with power derived from the number of handseals completed. Requires higher intelligence, and can only affect non-elemental ninjutsu.

    Equilibrium:

    Mods, I feel like this could be a solid technique or the beginning's of a fighting-style.  I think this could be accomplished with a regular Echo Drill-- basically just attaching the costs of Echo Drill to the following technique. The idea is: The more handsigns you can complete for a technique, the more sound-waves generated.


    Thunderclap is derived from Jacobi's own sound technique, with his permission.

    Thunderclap:
    Irui Style: Resonating Echo Drill: Equilibrium: As much as I know sound moves fast and it feels weird to not have it move fast, we can’t have a technique with D or B power having S-Rank speed. You also reference this causing damage if interrupted, but use “2” as an example, and I’m not sure I understand what this means.

    Irui-Style Lightning Release: Resonating Echo Drill: Thunderclap: Approved


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