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    Chika's Custom Techs

    Chika
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    Post by Chika Mon May 04, 2020 3:54 am


    Approved Techniques



    E-Rank
    ➤N/A

    D-Rank
    ➤Tenketsu Movement Technique Proto - Secret
    ➤Martial Puppetry - Open

    C-Rank
    ➤Tenketsu Movement Technique - Secret
    ➤Chakra Zipline - Secret
    ➤Razor Threads - Open
    ➤Way of the Spider - Secret
    ➤Spider Slide - Secret
    ➤Spider Sling - Secret

    B-Rank
    ➤Silent Fist - Open Canon
    ➤Tenketsu Blocking Strikes - Open Canon
    ➤White Haze Heavenly Dance - Hyuga Exclusive Canon

    A-Rank
    ➤N/A

    S-Rank
    ➤Last Resort: Eight Gates Crumbling Attack - Hyuga Exclusive Canon





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    Post by Chika Mon May 04, 2020 4:06 am

    String Whip:

    Eight Trigrams Puppet Yoyo Heaven Proto:

    Puppet Summon/Return (Spider):

    Quick Puppet Summon/Return (Spider):

    Rapid Puppet Summon (Spider):

    Note: the 3 summon techs will be for the spider contract once its ready.
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    Post by Luna Yamamoto Tue May 12, 2020 9:53 am

    Chika wrote:
    String Whip:

    This is conceptually denied. Non-Elemental technique are generally very limited in their capabilities. Creating solid cords of pure chakra would not only be an incredibly advanced technique, but would require a clan ability, enchantment, or restricted to achieve. Otherwise the easiest way to get something similar would be investing into an Element and using the element as a medium.


    Eight Trigrams Puppet Yoyo Heaven Proto:

    Heavenly Rotation is a sphere which expands outwards from the user's body. This makes it impossible for anything to exist within the sphere since it would just be repelled by the technique. But with the logic aside, I don't know what this technique is trying to accomplish. It sounds like something you can do without the need for a technique.


    Puppet Summon/Return (Spider):

    This sounds like a way to try and get Fuuinjutsu through Kuchiyose. You would not be able to summon your puppets through Kuchiyose unless you have a contract designated for your puppets.


    Quick Puppet Summon/Return (Spider):

    Same as above.


    Rapid Puppet Summon (Spider):

    Same as above.
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    Post by Chika Wed May 13, 2020 6:04 pm

    Tenketsu Movement Technique Proto:
    The next 4 are canon techniques with links in their spoilers

    Last Resort Eight Gates Crumbling Attack:

    Silent Fist - Approved:

    Tenketsu Blocking Strikes - Approved:

    White Haze Heavenly Dance:


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    Post by Kara Thu May 21, 2020 3:26 pm

    Chika wrote:
    Teketsu Movement Technique Proto:
    The next 4 are canon techniques with links in their spoilers

    Last Resort:

    Silent Fist:

    Tenketsu Blocking Strikes:

    White Haze Heavenly Dance:

    Teketsu Movement Technique Proto
    *In the Weaknesses it mentions that cut strings must be re-activated by the user, in the description it says “the user creates strings from many different points along their body” I would like to see a bit of clarification as to the number of strings created. As ambiguous as it is right now, it could be argued that cutting the strings isn’t a true drawback.

    Last Resort: Eight Gates Crumbling Attack
    *I’m not sure why there are 2 power ranks listed. This should probably be an S Rank jutsu with A Rank power.
    *Please add the actual weaknesses of Gentle Fist

    White Haze Heavenly Dance
    *The Template is missing the jutsu name
    *Please add the actual weaknesses of Gentle Fist

    Silent Fist, Tenketsu Blocking Strikes - Approved~
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    Post by Kara Thu May 21, 2020 4:51 pm

    Chika wrote:
    Tenketsu Movement Technique Proto:
    The next 4 are canon techniques with links in their spoilers

    Last Resort Eight Gates Crumbling Attack:

    Silent Fist - Approved:

    Tenketsu Blocking Strikes - Approved:

    White Haze Heavenly Dance:

    Tenketsu Movement Technique Proto, Last Resort: Eight Gates Crumbling Attack, White Haze Heavenly Dance - Approved~
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    Post by Chika Sun May 24, 2020 9:19 am

    Martial Puppetry:



    Tenketsu Movement Technique:



    Chakra Zipline:



    Tiptoe Tangle:



    Marionette Manipulation:
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    Post by Morithar Alaris Thu May 28, 2020 7:07 pm

    Martial Puppetry:
    [/quote]

    You're going to have to pay for each 'body' using the technique in question. Clone pay chakra each if they all use the same technique as an example. In this you're the only source of chakra, but that doesn't mean the chakra doesn't have to come from somewhere. So you'll have to have them cumulatively add up I'm afraid.



    Tenketsu Movement Technique:


    Approved



    Chakra Zipline:


    Approved



    Tiptoe Tangle:



    Marionette Manipulation:

    The ability to control more than 10 puppets at a time is pretty much a watered down performance of 100. Which since it's an exclusive tech to another village, you can't make.
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    Post by Chika Fri May 29, 2020 10:33 am

    Martial Puppetry:

    Razor Threads:

    Way of the Spider:

    Spider Slide:

    Spider Sling:
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    Post by Morithar Alaris Fri May 29, 2020 10:53 am

    Name: Martial Puppetry
    Rank: D
    Power: Varies
    Activation Cost: 0.1
    Upkeep Cost: 0.1
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Kugutsu
    Classification: Open
    Requirements: Taijutsu, Bukijutsu, Kenjutsu, or Kyūjutsu
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: Combining their knowledge of both Kugutsu and another martial art, the user manipulates a humanoid puppet into preforming a technique or fighting style that they know to a puppet.
    Weaknesses: Techniques that require chakra, such as Gentle Fist, need some way to supply the desired effect. This technique needs to be used for every individual technique & fighting style used on each individual puppet, potentially adding up in cost very quickly. (So a basic D rank fighting style being used by 10 puppets would cost 11 CP; 1 CP for each individual puppet and 1 CP for 10 uses of Martial Puppetry)

    I'm sorry I didn't catch this before, but the cost should be 3 initial and 1 upkeep.

    Name: Razor Threads
    Rank: C
    Power: Varies
    Activation Cost: Varies
    Upkeep Cost: Varies
    Range: Touch
    Speed: -
    Element: -
    Skill: Kugutsu
    Classification: Open
    Requirements: N/A
    Parent Technique: Chakra threads
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: The user puts more chakra into their chakra threads while simultaneously thinning them out, making the threads deadly to the touch. depending n how much chakra is put into the technique changes how much damage the threads can do. Standard CP costs for each rank of cutting damage. (E=1, D=3, C=5...)
    Weaknesses: This makes the threads very visible, making them a lot easier to avoid. Also the user cannot output more chakra then their Class. (So a D-rank Genin can't have S-rank cutting threads, only E or D power.)

    Rather than list the range as 'touch' specify that it's the chakra thread range.
    That line in your weakness about not using more chakra than their class actually nerfs this unnecessarily imo. Instead, say that the user cannot utilize a rank of this technique that their class could not utilize. Which allows a D rank to utilize the C rank version, a C rank person to use the B rank version, etc.

    Name: Way of the Spider
    Rank: D
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: -
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: Touch
    Speed: -
    Element: -
    Skill: Taijutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Kugutsu, C-Rank Coordination
    Parent Technique: Chakra Strings
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: A Taijutsu Fighting Style made to give puppeteers an edge in combat. The method relies on the user's quick movements to make rapid attacks with their feet while still keeping their hands free to control their puppets or attach strings to targets if necessary, such as running out of puppets. +1 tier boost to coordination.
    Weaknesses: N/A

    Make this C rank please.

    Name: Spider Slide
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 0-10m
    Speed: -
    Element: -
    Skill: Taijutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Kugutsu
    Parent Technique: Way of the Spider, Chakra Zipline
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: The user shoots and sticks their target with 2-4 Chakra strings, then slides under their legs and uses the momentum to slam their target down to the ground. +1 tier boost to strength.
    Weaknesses: Targets can resist this if they have a higher strength then their opponent.

    Approved

    Name: Spider Sling
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 0-10m
    Speed: -
    Element: -
    Skill: Taijutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Kugutsu,
    Parent Technique: Way of the Spider, Chakra Zipline, C-Speed
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: The user attaches a few chakra strings to an object such as a rock and spins around several times, using the initial pull of the zipline to start it's movement. They then detach the object and launch it it at their target, following the thrown item projectile rules. +1 Tier boost to Strength for moving & spinning an object, becoming a +1 tier boost to Coordination upon launch.
    Weaknesses:

    A technique that utilize one tier of a stat buff and force switches it to another is effectively 2 tiers for one cost. Please pick one or the other, personally. Specify in the description that the range of the thrown projectile is based on projectile rules and that the 0-10m range listed is only for the range in which you can grab the object.
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    Post by Chika Fri May 29, 2020 11:20 am

    Martial Puppetry:

    Razor Threads:

    Way of the Spider:

    Spider Sling:
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    Post by Morithar Alaris Fri May 29, 2020 11:26 am

    Chika wrote:
    Martial Puppetry:

    Razor Threads:

    Way of the Spider:

    Spider Sling:

    Approved

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