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    Magic Girl Pheonix tech's.

    ShimmyToTheLeft
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    Post by ShimmyToTheLeft Sat May 09, 2020 12:52 pm

    Name: Lava Pool.
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 5
    Range: 10 m [From Higure]; 0 - 30 m [Pool Size]
    Speed: C
    Element: Lava
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: BL Ninjutsu
    Requirements: Earth / Rock.
    Parent Technique: Earth Tearing Palm
    Hand Seals: Ox > Boar > Tiger > hands on target.
    Description: Much like its parent technique. Lava Pool converts the earth around the targeted area to turn into lava.
    Weaknesses:
    If the user doesn't have Lava Manipulation or suitable armor they can melt or burn from the heat. Shares the weakness to Ice techniques.

    Name: Rubber Armor
    Rank: A
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: 20
    Upkeep Cost: 10
    Range: Self
    Speed: A
    Element: Lava (Rubber variant)
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: BL Ninjutsu
    Requirements: NA
    Parent Technique: NA
    Hand Seals: Ox > Hare > Tiger
    Description: The user surrounds themselves by a thick A rank Armor that not only provides a 1++ Teir boost to speed and jump height. But repels all physical attacks under A rank in power.

    If the user pays the upkeep per post the armor can reform itself if damaged.
    Weaknesses:
    - Takes 1 full post to repair iteself.

    - Physical Attacks are attacks that deal cut, slash, piercing or bludgeoning type damage.

    But do not reflect lighting, wind, fire, or explosive damage.

    Only things that can physically hit it without a fire modifier.


    Name: Rubber Dome
    Rank: B / A / S
    Power: B / A / S
    Activation Cost: 10/15/20
    Upkeep Cost: 5/7/10
    Range: 10 m around target.
    Speed: -
    Element: Rubber
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: BL Ninjutsu
    Requirements: Preexisting Earth.
    Parent Technique: Earth Release Barrier: Earth Prison Dome of Magnificent Nothingness
    Hand Seals: Palms on earth.
    Description: Much like its parent technique it forms a barrier around a target and regenerates itself.

    But rather than drain CP. It instead causes any physical attack inside or out to be repelled, and debuffs Raiton by 1 tier.

    Repelled attacks have a chance of harming the person who made the attack (if it is equal or lower than the cost paid), making it perfect for trapping and defense.
    Weaknesses: If the damage is high and fast enough the barrier can break.

    Must unlock each stage individually.

    Name: Lake of the Underworld
    Rank: A
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: 20
    Range: 0 - 100m
    Speed: -
    Element: Lava
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Ninjutsu (Clan)
    Requirements: Pre-existing Earth
    Parent Technique:  Lava Pool, Swamp of the Underworld
    Hand Seals: Boar - Tiger
    Description: Much like it's parent techniques. This focuses on an area, and transforms it, but where as Swamp of the Underworld made a bog, Lake of the UnderWorld makes a Lake of Lava under the target that lasts as long as the upkeep is paid.
    Weaknesses: Can kill the user as well and destroys everything with too low a con within it.


    Name: Higure Special: Lava Bullet
    Rank: B
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: 20
    Upkeep Cost:
    Range: 70 m
    Speed: B
    Element: Lava
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Clan Special
    Requirements: N/A
    Parent Technique:  Drilling Air Breath, Dragon Bullet, Stone Pistol
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: Higure takes advantage of her Dual KKG and upon taking a deep breath first mixes Earth and Fire to make lava chakra, then spins it quickly mixes a compact ball of air within her chest.  

    Upon expelling it a glob of Lava the size of her fist is shot at high speeds. After 70m, it looses a - to speed for every 10m until it hits E speed where it falls to the ground.

    Lava ignites anything flammable near it, and melts things at A Rank of damage.

    Weaknesses:


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    Ryuko
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    Post by Ryuko Mon May 11, 2020 2:38 am

    [quote="ShimmyToTheLeft"]
    Name: Lake of the Underworld
    Rank: A
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: 20
    Range: 0 - 100m
    Speed: -
    Element: Lava
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Ninjutsu (Clan)
    Requirements: Pre-existing Earth
    Parent Technique:  Lava Pool, Swamp of the Underworld
    Hand Seals: Boar - Tiger
    Description: Much like it's parent techniques. This focuses on an area, and transforms it, but where as Swamp of the Underworld made a bog, Lake of the UnderWorld makes a Lake of Lava under the target that lasts as long as the upkeep is paid.
    Weaknesses: Can kill the user as well and destroys everything with too low a con within it.

    [quote] This needs a speed stat to reflect how quickly the lava it generates spreads to cover the full range.



    Name: Higure Special: Lava Bullet
    Rank: B
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: 20
    Upkeep Cost:
    Range: 70 m
    Speed: A
    Element: Lava
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Clan Special
    Requirements: N/A
    Parent Technique:  Drilling Air Breath, Dragon Bullet, Stone Pistol
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: Higure takes advantage of her Dual KKG and upon taking a deep breath first mixes Earth and Fire to make lava chakra, then spins it quickly mixes a compact ball of air within her chest.  

    Upon expelling it a glob of Lava the size of her fist is shot at high speeds. After 70m, it looses a - to speed for every 10m until it hits E speed where it falls to the ground.

    Lava ignites anything flammable near it, and melts things at A Rank of damage.

    Weaknesses:


    This needs to lower the speed to B to compensate for the increased power it gets for a lower rank tech

    Name: Lava Pool.
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: 10 m [From Higure]; 0 - 30 m [Pool Size]
    Speed: C
    Element: Lava
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: BL Ninjutsu
    Requirements: Earth / Rock.
    Parent Technique: Earth Tearing Palm
    Hand Seals: Ox > Boar > Tiger > hands on target.
    Description: Much like its parent technique. Lava Pool converts the earth around the targeted area to turn into lava.
    Weaknesses:
    If the user doesn't have Lava Manipulation or suitable armor they can melt or burn from the heat. Shares the weakness to Ice techniques.

    This has too low of a cost and upkeep For a B rank tech. It should be 10/5

    Name: Rubber Armor
    Rank: A
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: NA/5
    Range: Self
    Speed: A
    Element: Lava (Rubber variant)
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: BL Ninjutsu
    Requirements: NA
    Parent Technique: NA
    Hand Seals: Ox > Hare > Tiger
    Description: The user surrounds themselves by a thick A rank Armor that not only provides a 1++ Teir boost to speed and jump height. But repels all physical attacks under A rank in power.

    If the user pays the upkeep per post the armor can reform itself if damaged.
    Weaknesses:
    - Takes 1 full post to repair iteself.

    - Physical Attacks are attacks that deal cut, slash, piercing or bludgeoning type damage.

    But do not reflect lighting, wind, fire, or explosive damage.

    Only things that can physically hit it without a fire modifier.


    This has several problems. First it has too low of a cost and should be a minimum of 20/10. If you're not paying an upkeep you shouldn't be getting the stat boosts.

    Also it doesn't reflect the properties of rubber very well. Being good against Bludgeoning typed damage is fine but it wouldn't really prevent piercing. Logically speaking it should also be good at protecting against lightning since Rubber is a fantastic insulator.


    Name: Rubber Dome
    Rank: B / A / S
    Power: B / A / S
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: 10 m around target.
    Speed: -
    Element: Rubber
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: BL Ninjutsu
    Requirements: Preexisting Earth.
    Parent Technique: Earth Release Barrier: Earth Prison Dome of Magnificent Nothingness
    Hand Seals: Palms on earth.
    Description: Much like its parent technique it forms a barrier around a target and regenerates itself.

    But rather than drain CP. It instead causes any physical attack inside or out to be repelled, and debuffs Raiton by 1 tier.

    Repelled attacks have a chance of harming the person who made it, making it perfect for trapping and defense.
    Weaknesses: If the damage is high and fast enough the barrier can break.

    Must unlock each stage individually.

    Each stage needs to proper cost B should be 10/5, A should be 20/10 and S should be 30/20

    What is the difference between the different stages? Because I'm not seeing any reason for it to be different ranks.

    Also it's a physical barrier. If someone hits it with a punch or a kick I can see it replying them since it can stretch but that only applies to blunt things that hits the actual barrier from either inside or out.

    It's not going to prevent someone from say clocking the person who casted the dome in the first place if they are stuck inside it with them.

    ShimmyToTheLeft
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    Post by ShimmyToTheLeft Fri May 15, 2020 4:42 pm

    Fixed. Just waiting on Swamp to get a speed (since Lake I'd the Underworld is basically Swamp, but Lava). As for Rubber and Peircing.

    There is a large a science and testing on the whole Punctue Resistance for rubber materials, and this is Ninja Magic Rubber ... that has little explanation for it except "it's resistant to Raiton, bouncy, and use your imagination."

    Where as Lava = really fucking hot 'cause lava, and Likestone = "Mwahahaha! Everything you love will die by heat or poison! Tremble in despair!"

    Rubber's more like "It's made of magic. Make shit up as you go and have fun."

    If we really tried we could probably find all sorts of legal loopholes and madness to make rubber super OP and evil. As is, we're less looking at "what's real rubber do", and "what fun Doton / defense inspired shenanigans can we accomplish today?"


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