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    Shunko's Jutsu Registry and Known List.

    Shunko
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    Post by Shunko Thu Apr 16, 2020 5:42 pm

    Spoiler:

    Fuuin:

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    Ninjutsu:

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    Bukijutsu:

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    Sensory:

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    Post by Shunko Thu Apr 16, 2020 6:16 pm

    Name:  Backpack Seal  
    Rank:C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Range: Self
    Speed: -
    Element: Non-Elemental
    Skill: Fuuinjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Tattoo on body.
    Parent Technique: Enclosing Jutsu
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: An amped up version of Enclosing Jutsu, allows a place on the body to act as a Sealing Scroll for items, and non-living beings.

    It has a storage space of 200' x 200'.
    Weaknesses: Any Fuuin user that notices the tattoo as a Fuuin, can read what's in there and unseal its contents.

    It has the same limits and weaknesses as Enclosing Jutsu
    With the notable difference of it being able to hold more items.

    Name: Predator
    Rank: C Rank
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep 3
    Range: Self
    Speed: -
    Element: Non-Elemental
    Skill: Sensory
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements Has Sensory Skill
    Parent Technique: Suppression Technique.
    Hand Seals: Tiger, Ram
    Description: The user expands the suppression around them to suppress not just their presence, but hide their sounds and scents.

    Spotting them is a Perception vs Perception check, with the person needing a higher Perception by 1 Rank than the users.

    Weaknesses: Doesn't prevent a person from seeing the user, and prevents the user from using any Jutsu over C rank while it's in effect. It also lowers the user's perception by 1 Tier while in use.


    Name: Sensory Disturbance.
    Rank:C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep: 3
    Range: Sensory Range
    Speed: -
    Element: Non-Elemental
    Skill: Sensory
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Sensory Technique.
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: The user uses their Sensory technique to emit a chakra wave that disrupts perception by 1 Rank. This range is reduced by 1/2 when using Suppression based techniques.
    Weaknesses:


    Name: Empowering Aura
    Rank: C Rank
    Activation Cost: 5 / person buffed.
    Upkeep: 3 / person buffed.
    Range: 0 - 20m
    Speed: C
    Element: Non-Elemental
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements:  -
    Parent Technique: Chakra Flow
    Hand Seals: bN/A
    Description: An extension of Body Flow, where Shunko channels chakra throughout her body, and lets it seep into her aura physically manifesting her aura. Either as a red flame, golden flame, or a red demon skull depending on her mood (said "flames and skulls" are purely aesthetic fluff and don't have an effect past showing how far the Jutsu effect is.).

    Spreads Chakra Flow throughout her body (whole body gets the Chakra Flow perk), and can buff allies within the aura.

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    Works by using the same principles of Chakra Flow, giving the same benefits as it's parent Jutsu. But by expanding it within an aura allows Shunko to not just full body Chakra Flow herself, but grant the same to others by effectively "Chakra Flowing" their bodies at a additional cost as long as they are within the area of effect.


    Essentially a Buki-Nin technique utilizing the mechanics of chakra flow, but rather than limited to just weapons. Effects the entirety of the affected's body.
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    Weaknesses: Follows same rules, buffs, and weaknesses as Chakra Flow.


    Name: Destructive Aura
    Rank: C Rank
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep: 3
    Range: 0-20 m
    Speed: C
    Power: C
    Element:
    Skill:
    Classification:
    Requirements:
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: Releases an Aura of destructive power that attacks with pure chakra while debuffing non-buffed allies with -1 tier Constitution for each entity within the auras range.


    Weaknesses: Can harm allies, as well as surroundings if care isn't taken to safe guard them.[/u]


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    Post by Ryuko Sat Apr 18, 2020 1:11 am

    Shunko wrote:Jutsu effecting UA and Skills:
    Non-Elemental Affinity from Ninjutsu Spec
    Monstrous Hunger for Chakra Absorption Tech creation
    Heart of the Blade:  +1 Rank power, Cost +1 Rank (A Rank Power Cap.)


    Please don't take these into account when registering jutsu as they need to registered at their base cost.   Skills perks and UA only go into effect when the jutsu in question are actually cast



    [u]Name: Hiding in Shadows
    Rank: C
    Activation Cost: 3 (Non-Elemental Affinity)
    Upkeep: 1
    Range: Self
    Speed: -
    Element: Non-Elemental
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Open
    Requirements: Standing on a shadow or in a dark area.
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: Tiger
    Description: The user melds into a shadow, hiding their presence in it until they emerge.
    Weaknesses: The user can't attack when fully inside a shadow, and intense lights break the jutsu.


    As this is a cannon jutsu it should apped  in the Technique requestpage

    In this case it should be made to be equivalent to Hiding in Water, with the same speed status ect. Once it's adequate we will add it to the library.



    Name: Shadow Movement
    Rank: C
    Activation Cost: 3 (Non-Elemental Affinity)
    Upkeep: 1
    Range: Shadows touching / areas of darkness.
    Speed: D Rank
    Element: Non-Elemental
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Same as with Hiding in Shadows
    Parent Technique: Hiding in Shadows.
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: While using Hiding in Shadows, the user can move from shadow to shadow as long as the shadows or areas of darkness are touching.
    Weaknesses: As with Hiding in Shadows, the user can't attack while hidden.


    Denied as heavily Shadow based jutsu like this is the exlusive domain of the Nara clan.


    Name: Predator
    Rank: C Rank
    Activation Cost: 3 (N-E Affin)
    Upkeep 1
    Range: Self
    Speed: -
    Element: Non-Elemental
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: Has Sensory Skill.
    Parent Technique: Suppression Technique.
    Hand Seals: Tiger, Ram.
    Description: The user expands chakra around them to suppress not just their presence, but hide their sounds and scents.

    Spotting them is a Perception vs Perception check, with the person needing a higher Perception by 1 Rank than the users.

    Weaknesses: Doesn't prevent a person from seeing the user, nor does it prevent them from hearing them if they talk. It purely muffles sound along side Chakra Suppression (on top of Chakra Suppressions weakness.)


    This needs to be classified as sensory technique not Ninjutsu as well as a higher upkeep to reflect the additional cost.


    Name: Empowering Aura
    Rank: C Rank
    Activation Cost: 10 / person buffed.
    Upkeep: 5 / person buffed.
    Range: 0 - Sensory Range
    Speed: -
    Element: Non-Elemental
    Skill: Bukijutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements:  -
    Parent Technique: Chakra Flow
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: An extension of Body Flow, where Shunko channels chakra throughout her body, and lets it seep into her aura physically manifesting her aura. Either as a red flame, golden flame, or a red demon skull depending on her mood (said "flames and skulls" are purely aesthetic fluff and don't have an effect past showing how far the Jutsu effect is.).

    Spreads Chakra Flow throughout her body, and into her Sensory Range (and can boost others as well for paying for each individual buffed.).

    (Is 1 Rank higher in power than Chakra Flow, but is reflected in the B Rank costs).

    Weaknesses: Follows same rules, buffs, and weaknesses as Chakra Flow.


    Name: Destructive Aura
    Rank: C Rank
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep: 5
    Range:
    Speed: -
    Element: N-E
    Skill: Bukijutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: N-E
    Parent Technique: Empowering Aura
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: Releases an Aura of destructive power that attacks with pure chakra while debuffing non-buffed allies with -1 tier Constitution for each post a person is in the effect range.

    (Same as with Empowering Aura is B Rank in Power, but has the B rank price tag from the UA.)

    Weaknesses: Can harm allies, as well as surroundings if care isn't taken to safe guard them.


    I'm sorry but you can't make auras with Bukijutsu
    Both those techs, Empowering and Destructive Aura need to be Ninjutsu

    They also need to be listed with real rangers and speed.  Allowing Allowing chakra flow at sensory ranges, which is what it seems to imply is way too over powered.

    Also in general they need to explain what they actually do better since right now it's too vague and hard for staff to grasp.
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    Post by Shunko Mon Apr 20, 2020 11:58 pm

    Tag.
    Ryuko
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    Post by Ryuko Thu Apr 23, 2020 9:32 pm

    For Backpack Seal if it's intended to be a slightly better version of Enclosing Technique - you should include the description and weaknesses etc. of Enclosing Technique

    it should also be N/A Element
    Also the parent technique is actually 'Enclosing Technique'

    also... what exactly is a 'non-living being'? I would assume that would mean dead body parts and things of that nature but as written it's pretty ambiguous.

    For Predator it should also be listed as N/A Element

    The jutsu contradicts itself in its weakness - it's described as suppressing sounds and scents and then in the weaknesses it say it doesn't prevent them from being heard if they talk - so how does it work?

    A better weakness would be if it debuffed the users own preception since sounds wouldn't reach them as well while the suppression is turned on

    Just so you're aware the ninjutus perk to make non elemental skills cost less only works for Ninjutsu in the first place.

    You could include an element for sensory if you also included ninjutsu but it's going to need a good explanation. Ie using drops of water of locate things they touch ect

    I would also like to see an included weakness regarding what techniques can be used with this one - like the parent technique has. If it's intended to be the same, that's fine but it should still be written down.

    Empowering Aura; It mentions buffing ppl - but it doesn't list how
    I think it needs to list what buffs it provides, how close ppl need to be to be buffed (during the initial activation and throughout the length of the buff)

    It's also saying the parent technique is Chakra Flow - which is fine except that's ken/buki
    It's weird for a child tech to be a completely different catagory without a good reason.

    For Destructive Aura you forgot to listed it as ninjutsu.

    It needs a better explanation; can't have empowering aura as a parent (since that one needs to change anyway) Needs an element (most likely N/A by how it's described), needs a listed skill requirement, needs a classification, needs hand seals (especially since it does damage), needs a better description of the weakness - since right now it's not really a weakness
    a debuff AND C Rank (I assume at least since you didn't write that) damage definitely needs a weakness



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    Post by Shunko Sat May 09, 2020 1:20 pm

    Bump and fix?

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