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    Tsukiyo's Custom Jutsu

    Tsukiyo Shinku
    Tsukiyo Shinku



    Village : Konohagakure
    Rank : Chunin
    Clan : N/A
    Discord Tag : Jacobi

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    Post by Tsukiyo Shinku Sat Mar 28, 2020 1:08 am

    Auras:

    Jutsu:


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    Tsukiyo Shinku
    Tsukiyo Shinku



    Village : Konohagakure
    Rank : Chunin
    Clan : N/A
    Discord Tag : Jacobi

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    Post by Tsukiyo Shinku Sat Mar 28, 2020 1:08 am

    Original thread here. Everything previously approved.
    Chigetsu
    Chigetsu



    Village : Kirigakure
    Rank : Genin
    Clan : Hōzuki
    Discord Tag : Lithium#2476

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    Post by Chigetsu Sat Mar 28, 2020 1:11 am

    Tsukiyo Shinku wrote:
    Auras:

    Jutsu:

    Approved
    Tsukiyo Shinku
    Tsukiyo Shinku



    Village : Konohagakure
    Rank : Chunin
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    Discord Tag : Jacobi

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    Post by Tsukiyo Shinku Mon Apr 27, 2020 6:44 am

    Jutsu:
    Ryuko
    Ryuko


    Village : Kumogakure
    Rank : Jounin
    Clan : N/A
    Discord Tag : Ryuko

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    Post by Ryuko Mon Apr 27, 2020 11:04 pm

    Tsukiyo Shinku wrote:
    Jutsu:

    Approved
    Tsukiyo Shinku
    Tsukiyo Shinku



    Village : Konohagakure
    Rank : Chunin
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    Post by Tsukiyo Shinku Mon May 18, 2020 6:02 pm

    Jutsu:
    Chigetsu
    Chigetsu



    Village : Kirigakure
    Rank : Genin
    Clan : Hōzuki
    Discord Tag : Lithium#2476

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    Post by Chigetsu Tue May 19, 2020 4:52 pm

    Tsukiyo Shinku wrote:
    Jutsu:

    Approved
    Tsukiyo Shinku
    Tsukiyo Shinku



    Village : Konohagakure
    Rank : Chunin
    Clan : N/A
    Discord Tag : Jacobi

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    Post by Tsukiyo Shinku Tue May 26, 2020 6:52 am

    Auras:

    Jutsu:
    Morithar Alaris
    Morithar Alaris



    Village : Iwagakure
    Rank : Jounin
    Clan : No u
    Discord Tag : Malyaska#2258

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    Post by Morithar Alaris Wed May 27, 2020 11:44 am

    Name: Kokoro no Ishi ('Mind's Will')
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Ijutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: N/A
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: Ram > Horse > Bird
    Description: By focusing chakra, the user is able to access the mental blocks naturally holding back the mind from running at full complicity, and using a small surge in chakra, the user will unlock these mental blocks. A coat of chakra forms over the user, light green in color like many healing techniques. This aura is there to protect the user's mind from damage due to overworking it. This aura allows the user a 1 tier boost to their intelligence.
    Weaknesses: N/A[/spoiler]


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    Name: Megasameta ('Mind's Eye Awakened')
    Rank: S
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Ijutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: A Int
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: The user will take their thumb and push it to the center of their forehead, sparking a chain reaction within the user's body. Blood flow is focused to the brain, increasing its overall ability to process information, metaphorically unlocking their 'Third Eye' and opening their mind fully to the world around them. This grants the user a 1 tier boost to Intelligence.
    Weaknesses: N/A

    The rank for this is too high and will need to be knocked down to C with the hand seals changed appropriately. Or the boost and cost could be increased to make it an S rank jutsu. For the record, I asked regarding our conversation and it was ruled that you cannot simply make the jutsu a higher rank to circumvent the hand seal requirements of certain ranks.

    Name: Josho Hi ('Rising Fire')
    Rank: S
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: N/A
    Speed: User's Coordination
    Element: Katon
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C Coordination+
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: Tiger
    Description: The user forms a Tiger seal and light blue flames appear around the user's ankles, encircling them in a roughly inch thick ring of fire about each ankle. These flames do not burn at all, and are completely safe to touch by anyone. They provide the user with flight, lifting them by their feet, allowing the user to hover, and fly using these flames of chakra to propel them through the air.
    Weaknesses: Height is limited by the user's coordination, following the height limit rules for flight. Without at least C Coordination, Flight may not be achieved.

    C: 25 m.
    B: 100 m.
    A: 250 m.
    S: 500 m

    Flight height isn't based on coordination, only flight speed and control is. Flight height is based upon the rank of the jutsu in question.

    Name: Hai Sogi ('Ashen Funeral')
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: 20
    Range: 50m
    Speed: A
    Element: Katon, Doton
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C Coordination
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: Clap Hands together
    Description: The user will clap their hands together, and immediately following the ground will shift to quickly enclose the target in a Earthen chamber, a 4x4x4 meter box, enough to trap a small squad or a summon. If the target was successfully captured, the user will take in a deep breath, before exhaling a stream of flames through a small slit in the chamber, roughly eye level. The flames fill the chamber, torching any unlucky soul inside with S rank damage. The user may continue feeding these flames for an upkeep cost.
    Weaknesses: This is a Two-Stage technique, the second stage relying on capturing the target with the first stage.[/spoiler]

    This feels like two jutsu to me, the first being a capture jutsu and the next being one to utilize that capturing the barbecue those inside. All for the cost of a single technique. I'd rather see this separated into the individual elements of the technique.

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